literature

candor.

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we sat in your basement
drinking hot chocolate
and freezing our toes
off,
because we didn't have
a blanket to cuddle in.

your eyelashes are much too long;
they hide those cinnamon
eyes i want to hold and
keep in a jar
so i can stare at them
forever.

we played air guitar
and pretended we were
superstars;
our dreams felt so fragile.
i didn't want to talk too loud-
i was afraid to break our dreams
like the wind whips through
a spider's web.

i fell asleep curled up
in the basement
listening to your heart beat-
my toes were warm
because they were
tangled in yours.

candor; honesty in giving one's view or opinion; frankness and sincerity

this is pretty much
the most honest
i can be.
:heart:
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breathingaia's avatar
All of your poetry is really interesting, because I feel like you don't filter it and wash it out. So yeah, that's all I wanted to say... Good job, and thank you :)